The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advance technology which can prevent and solve crime . do you agree and disagree ?
These days in the modern countries with advance technology, the crime rates are low while, another poor countries without these facilities show high against the low rates. I completely agree with this opinion and I will state the reasons for my view.
Firstly, the most compelling reasons for supporting my view is the police high tech facilities. For instance, one of the important things that I want to highlight about my idea, is GPS and Online connection. In addition the government have to dedicate less budget to preparing low qualities things. As result, when they increased their secret crime control ways, find criminals, trafficking and suspects was much more easily than past. Consequently, the criminals do not have any opportunities to commit crimes like murder, mugging and selling fire arm.
Secondly, when criminal tried to encourage teenagers to illegal activities, technology can informed their through Internet and Online association. For example the schools and parents play an important role to introduce crime and its disadvantage results. This is because their learn to who to can preserve their social and personal health.
In conclusion, If countries use modern technological facilities to improve their police forces and schools, could have the safer than another countries.
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
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Message: Did you mean 'firearm'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: firearm
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1113.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 203.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48275862069 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79907875978 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.684729064039 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0798274348 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.181818182 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143850963773 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458762214455 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364020790763 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0763290449713 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281941433071 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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