With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources.
To what extent do you agree?
Oil and gas are one of the most consumed resources the Earth has to offer. However, due to the increase in the population, the need for oil and gas is on the rise. This has resulted in global depletion of these resources. Therefore, some people have advised that we search for these resources in new, undiscovered areas of the world. Though, discovering new areas might help in obtaining these resources, it will cause damage to the Earth’s environment and its future. Hence, I disagree that we should discover new are areas for oil and gas.
We have already caused enough damage to the Earth’s environment due to rampant use of fossil fuels. The oil and petroleum companies are running out of resources which has caused decline in their profits. Hence, they are looking for new areas to extract oil and gas. Due to excessive drilling, negative impacts such as global warming, damage to marine biology caused by frequent oil spills can be seen. This has resulted in irreversible damage to the ecosystem.
Instead of looking for new places for oil and gas, we should use the abundantly available renewable sources such as solar and wind energy. These resources are never ending and have no adverse effects on the environment. Instead of using fuel powered modes of transport, using electric cars is much more beneficial. Photovoltaic solar panels can be used to generate electricity to power houses and vehicles.
Considering the current situation, using renewable sources for our energy needs is the only viable option. Use of fossil fuels should be limited to certain fields only, which will reduce the need of oil and gas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, look, so, therefore, as for, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03284671533 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6440088263 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536496350365 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6881753525 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.1176470588 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1176470588 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47058823529 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183985638092 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657140416899 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497994098429 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111881116339 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525171490255 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.