In many countries, people now wear Western clothes (suits, jeans) rather than traditional clothing. Why? Is this a positive or negative development?
We are living in a period of time that sees a big change in fashion style, especially in some eastern countries when people tend to dress like a westerner. There are some reasons for this tendency and it would affect society in many different ways.
There are two main features causing this shift in wearing trend such as in Vietnam, Chinese or Korea. First of all, the development of economic growth could be a good opportunity for the mixture of every culture in terms of the flat world nowadays. This is the major factor that affects directly on choosing clothes habit. The civilized society in western typically in Europe has outstripped most of the eastern countries for decades, thus easterners have preferred to copy the westerners in lifestyle, for example in fashion choice. Furthermore, traditional clothes usually are considered as outdated outfits in modern life. People should choose to wear fashionable clothes such as suits, shirts or jeans rather than antique ones which have lots of olden details on them and no longer be appropriate nowadays.
However, this tendency could have negative impacts on society. The differences in outfits might identify who you are or your nationality because of their own features have been presented outside. Nevertheless, during the trend of wearing as same as each other in many regions and nations, the diversity in culture is being threatened seriously. Many traditional clothes are in urgent preservation as a tangible cultural heritage in attempts of local government to maintain one of the uniqueness of their country while others took a worse consequence which is completely disappearing. Moreover, this clothing trend also has a negative influence on the awareness of the younger people in society. The youth would have no attitudes in protecting or any sense of cherishing spiritual values that the previous generations left them.
In conclusion, wearing western clothes is trending in many nations recently and it influences some aspects of modern society but above all, it caused more negative impacts instead of positive ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27083333333 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78143112929 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592261904762 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1895960888 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.066666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275107783827 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081428774556 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587798849555 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151824629741 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550710664455 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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