Some people think competitive sports, such as football, are valuable because they can gather people with different ages and cultures together. Some think competitive sports can cause problems because people are from different groups and countries. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Competitive sports like football and basketball are popular worldwide. People argue whether those games boost the harmony between people from different backgrounds or not. From my perspective, conflicts may be caused, I think sports help the world unit together.
Admittedly, competitive games can cause conflicts because the teams represent different groups and countries. When a team win a game, people may think their abilities are superior than other teams, even other groups of people. That is why some people only concern about results, and if they lost a game, they might get frustrated. The most famous example should be the World Cup held in Russia. The British fought with Russian and destroyed the shops to present their power since they lost the game.
Nevertheless, I agree with the opinion that the competitive games created harmony between people from different ages and cultures even though what we reached above. Firstly, the team spirit push everyone aims to the victory and all the players need to play cooperatively for their best performance regardless of races. Secondly, the audience of the games could from anywhere. The games make them sit together and express their feelings about the games. Furthermore, some audience applause for the rival teams for their extraordinary performance, which is respective. At that time, people from different cultures could understand each other and eliminate bias.
In conclusion, although competitive games arouse some conflicts, it seems to me that the competitive games prompt the peace and harmony worldwide.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4674796748 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69151127253 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609756097561 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7689598279 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6666666667 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336322123728 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104696595519 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868235668955 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197685757798 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611697371366 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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