In some countries, online shopping is replacing shopping in stores. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
With the development of technology, a growing number of people is inclined to shop online and even give up going shopping in the department store. I believe it is a positive development.
Despite shopping in the store provides us a real experience, we can hang out with friends and try wearing clothes by themselves to avoid some troubles, such as wrong sizes, stylish problems. It seems like a way to boost the friendship and gain genuine pleasure. However, those kinds of problems can be carefully tackled through sharing shopping experience with friends by social networking apps and enjoy the after-sales services.
There is no doubt that shopping online bring more convenience to us. It increases the flexibility and efficiency in time because shops online are available 24 hours a day, 7 days a week. life online shopping can occur at any time, especially for those who are always occupied with stuffs.
Thus, they can pay closer attention to improve job skills in the workplace instead of wasting time in it, which helps us to be more efficient.
On the top of that, it provides more services than the real stores. You can receive the products in short days, usually 2 or 4 days, due to the express services. And at the same time, after-sale services offer a free opportunity for customers to change or even return goods to the manufacturers if there is a complaint. More benefits are provided to us, when compared with shopping in real stores.
To summary, online shopping brings both convenience and better services to us when i reckon that shopping in the store is time-consuming and few quality guarantees. What we really need is to have a satisfactory shopping experience, so the trend in the case is positive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, really, so, thus, i reckon, in short, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97610921502 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82875245307 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60409556314 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8995823822 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53333333333 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248071441583 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853143044232 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625923008577 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130316817786 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782182847616 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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