In the 18th century due to industrialization a lot of people migrated to developed countries. This affected lifestyle and increased major problems in developed countries. Discuss the problems and solutions to overcome these problems.
Recently, the impacts of migration on people's lifestyle has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question "what are the consequences of migration due to industrialization in the 18th century?". Whereas it is a widely held view that migration has not negative effects, I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
From the socio-economy standpoint, migration patterns are bound up inextricably with developed countries, which indicates they lead to both workers and educated individuals. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2018 demonstrates the relationship between cultural issues and immigration as well as an exponential increase in inequity. Their academic criticism was impressive. consequently, my empirical evidence presented thus far supports the contention that the likelihood of employment is correlated positively with not only skilled staff but also manufactures.
Within the realm of public prosperity, without the slightest doubt, undeveloped countries attribute to unemployment, in that it would come down to manufacturing products, hiring, and young workers. A salient example of such attribution is management, which is a cause for concern since it was mistaken to take incorrect decision for granted. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars might have had the opportunity to pinpoint industrialization problems. Likewise, hardly had they confined their attention to seasonal workers, poverty, and even democratic environment. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the pivotal role of government and private sector in project investment.
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes "all's well that ends well," after analyzing what elaborated above, I firmly believe that government must be accountable to face with this issue. However, with the benefit of hindsight, we conceive the more we research, the further we discover.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, likewise, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 5.75862068966 330% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1207.87684729 143% => OK
No of words: 288.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 6.00347222222 5.00649968141 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40818023517 2.71678728327 125% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 139.433497537 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.697916666667 0.580463131201 120% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 379.143842365 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1685933314 50.4703680194 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0 104.977214359 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134647783515 0.242375264174 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0353945925221 0.0925447433944 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533042743823 0.071462118173 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0741033554016 0.151781067708 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688516603754 0.0609392437508 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 12.6369458128 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.52 11.5310837438 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.14 8.32886699507 134% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 55.0591133005 212% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.94827586207 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.5123152709 171% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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