Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
The statement is stating position about the scandals and its importance, where some issues stay hidden due to any reason, scandles can help to bring them into attention. Scandles help to highlight the issues which can not be spoken by any speaker or reformer due to external pressure. It can be advantageous in many ways for a person to whole nation.
First of all, scandles can highlight the hidden problems when performed in a positive way, for instance, “MeToo” scandles upset a lot of people around the world when highlighted on the social media but helped many people who were suffering from the sexual embarrasement. It is really helpful at times when any one suffering from problem and can not speak due the lack of courage or societical pressure.
Additionally, scandles can also help to resolve the nation’s issues which could benefit the nation in many ways. For example, in a democratic nation, a ruiling party and its chores are always in the news so that people of the nation can know about their selected party’s performance. If the ruling party is not performing well or did something which can not be in the favor of nation, people are able to raise their voice. There are many instances where nation got benefited from the scandles, and one of those President Donald Trump’s lynching case during the elections highlighted as a scandle where the congress is perfoming hearing on the case, in this situation it is not important who is wrong or right but at least the people of the nation are aware of the case.
Moreover, scandles also help not only to an individual or a group of people but it is also helpful in our surroundings everyday. Scandles help to overcome the disguise and bring out that problem into the attention of people. The supporting example of this is environmental issue of the climate change. The protests and talking about the climate issues brought the attention of not only government of the nation but also throughtout the world.
Hence, scandles can be benefitted to everyone if done in the positive and constructive way to bring out serious issues and find out the resolutions to those issues. There should not be undue advantage of the scandles. The scandles can help to bring courage in the society as well as resolution of many unresolved problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ight the hidden problems when performed in a positive way, for instance, 'MeToo' scandl...
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Line 13, column 120, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... it is also helpful in our surroundings everyday. Scandles help to overcome the disguise...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, really, so, well, at least, for example, for instance, talking about, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1948.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 394.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94416243655 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79362312797 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477157360406 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.4838226983 60.3974514979 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.75 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.625 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3125 5.21951772744 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0706395078864 0.243740707755 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.028790668092 0.0831039109588 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0276831494766 0.0758088955206 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0453243685609 0.150359130593 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026234227101 0.0667264976115 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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