In many countries today, people in cities either live alone or in small family units, rather than in large family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?
In the recent years, the family sizes have been smaller than it used to be, and, this situation has had a number of profound impacts on not only individual life but also all aspects of society. In my opinion, there are both advantages and disadvantages in this case.
On the one hand, fewer members in a family can cause negative effects on family relationship and the national economy. Firstly, in modern society, the generation, when they are in the nest-leaving age, has a tendency to get away from their houses and live independently. It means that there is less time for children and parents to interact, thus breaking the knit-close family relationship. Furthermore, the increase of nuclear family is due to delaying parenthood. As a result, the number of young people in the workforce would decline, which have adverse effects on the sustainability of national economy.
On the other hand, besides drawbacks the development of small family also bring many benefits. In fact, members in a small family will often have a better life than in the family with many generations. For example, only child will be fostered and educated better, since their parents allocate all their resources to nurture their child. In addition, fewer people in a family can lower breadwinner’s burden. It is obvious that they are under the fewer amount of responsibility than those looking after a large extended family.
In conclusion, nowadays, nuclear families have become ever popular. I personally think that although this development causes many disadvantages, there are also a wide variety of advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, so, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18846153846 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97148927656 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588461538462 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3104821253 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3571428571 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7142857143 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2603373262 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087764556428 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597435307103 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143838105785 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430470049449 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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