Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world. Especially among young people. Identify the possible causes of this trend, and propose some solutions you think would be effective.
Criminal actions have increased among young population in many countries all around the world. The origins of this situation seem to drive from two factors, while several remedies appear to be open to us.
Perhaps the major factor here is unemployment. This factor is a root cause for financial issues, meaning that the more unemployment in society we have, the more financial problems would be. Therefore, committing crime among young generation appear to be the easiest way to earn a living, so unemployment may act as a contributing factor to raise the number of juvenile delinquents in a society. Another cause is the lake of education among the young generation; as a result they perhaps able to find a just ill-paid job, so making a living appears to become a grave problem in their day-to-day life. In this situation, they tend to commit crime to earn more money and afford their life. Thus, unemployment and lack of education appear to contribute to committing crime by young people.
Turning to possible remedies, an obvious step would be to generate more job opportunities by the government. For example, industrialization is one of the best measures to employ the young and provide them with a well-paid job in order to improve their quality of life. Another solution might be adapting a compulsory education approach during their childhood and adolescence. This scheme may enhance their educational status and lead to well-educated young generation who are able to apply for well-paid and higher job positions. As can be seen, instigating these measures might reduce crime among young people.
In Summary, the factors of joblessness and lack of academic background seem to be the main causes. Creating new job opportunities by means of industrialization and introducing compulsory education scheme for teenagers may well lessen the severity of the situation.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in summary, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20462046205 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02996540348 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544554455446 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1978380567 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.133333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256849887625 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902144672199 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571441490098 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147760582038 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627968556647 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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