Some people think that to reduce traffic problem people will come from rural areas to live in urban areas. What extant do you agree or disagree?
It is thought that traffic and tranportation problem will be eradicated if people migrate from countryside to urban area. However, I think it will multiply the issue rather than solving it. Urbanization will bring a lot more traffic problems to cities because of increase in urban population, more transport services are required to facilitate people. In this essay I will discuss my opinion with example.
Urbanization means there will be more vehicles in cities as citizen from different age groups will need them to move around. In oder to fulfil their task and responsibilities, residence will need vehicles to go to restaurants, education centers and hospitals. For instance, common people required vehicle like car and buses to complete their tasks such as jobs, festivals and education. This will augment the traffic congestion on roads instead of decreasing it. In addition, if urbanization will speed up, urban area will expand for sure which means further development of houses and infrastructure will require. This development of housing and infrastructures will cause burden on existing roads. Heavy lorries, for example loaded with construction material will block the traffic of old roads. Therefore, encouraging people to live in the countryside will reduce the traffic problem.
Notwithstanding the idea of urbanization, I think rural and countryside will develop both economically and physically. If employment opportunities would provided there, inhabitants of these area will not come to metropolitan areas to seek jobs. This would reduce demand of taxi and buses from transportation sector. Also, as long as these areas would equipped with facilities like gardens, recreational places, hospitals, educational centers, entertainment and parks, people would not visit cities again and again. By reducing number of trips, transport needs can be easily fulfilled and traffic crowding will not seen.
To conclude, after transforming suburbs into self-sufficient industrial, agriculture commercial hubs, traffic and transportation issue can be solved in already exiting cities. Whereas, encouraging people to migrate from urban to rural areas will amplify this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, whereas, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 26.0 7.85571142285 331% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1873.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71036585366 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14188182479 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591463414634 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7491354857 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5789473684 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2631578947 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57894736842 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337834662916 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117121624798 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894284537921 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195742400609 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568366568816 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.54 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.