The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lesson in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Increasing number of obese people are creating pressure on their heath system in order to handle heath related problems. Few people opine that this issue can be solved by adopting some more sports and exercising activities in the educational institutions in their syllabus. I completely agree that extra physical lessons definitely aid to solve health issues. In the following essay I shall discuss the same.
It is true that physical exercise is vita to maintain good heath. Firstly, school is the institution where children learn many activities majorly physical education which helps them to remain fit and healthy. Sports bring energy and enthusiasm in life that assist in staying away from health problems. To elaborate, health care department reported that those people do exercise or physical activities on regular basic are more healthy and fit as compare with others. Secondly, nowadays people are living sedentary life at office and home. They do not get involve in any physical work. This living style brings them closer to overweight problem and people have to deal with many other health issue. For instance, times news reported that 60 percent people are over weighted due to their sedentary life style.
In other words, it is necessary to have knowledge and importance of physical education to the people. This can be learned in the school which definitely prove beneficial to all. Moreover, extra-sports activities aid to built fitness, energy and confidence.
To conclude, it is imperative for all schools to introduce extra physical activities in order to tackle with overweight problem among the people and maintain fitness in all.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31060606061 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61875870468 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579545454545 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5607779194 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.625 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308975579421 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861817332701 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794172400697 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167840040136 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075044088544 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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