Successful sports stars and glamorous film stars are youngsters role model. Do you support it or not?
Although such topics will never yield a consensual agreement, a dialogue on "Successful sports stars and glamorous films stars are youngsters role model" can lead to thought-provoking discussions. My view is that, irrespective of numerous arguments that exist on either side, My view is that, Seventy five percent of youngsters follow successful sports star and film stars as a role model. Through the course of this essay, I shall explain my point of view by considering both the sides of the arguments.
Every individual will have a role model in their life, Mostly all the youngsters will follow the successfull personalities, especially sports stars and film stars, because we are following them up on our daily basis throught social media's and mass media's. They should follow only the good characters or actions from them, omitting all the other activities which will cause harm to them and others.
Few youngsters will follow their parents, teachers, doctor's or any other personalities as their role model. They will pick them based on their interest and hobby. For example , If my aim is to become a CEO of some good organization, then i will follow "Sundar Pichai" Google CEO, And will follow all his speach to achieve my goal.
I see that there is potential evidence to support the arguments i have provided, and hence, my opinion is that , Not only Sports and film stars are youngsters role model, I am inclined to believe that parents, teachers, and other personalities will be their role models.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 251.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13944223108 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94267115629 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581673306773 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.0905045626 50.4703680194 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.333333333 104.977214359 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8888888889 20.9669160288 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 7.25397266985 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330109502613 0.242375264174 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146746948664 0.0925447433944 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150342948319 0.071462118173 210% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220084853586 0.151781067708 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135152937098 0.0609392437508 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 12.6369458128 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 53.1260098522 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.9458128079 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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