Global Warming
Over the last few decades, the world has seen that global warming is one of the biggest threats to our environment. Because of increases temperature through air pollution or climate changes. This essay will firtly discuss problem then provide some possible solutions.
The main problem is related to burning fossill fuel. This may be because of the fact that most of people use private transports everyday and smokes from factories in the world. Moreover, using too much electricity like computer, lights make energy resource decrease. In addition, cutting down trees make atmosphere do not produce oxygen and not renewable air. For instance, the radio AQI in Hanoi rocketing to 200 because emissions from transport too much.
However, we are have many solutions for this problem. Firstly, instead of using private transport, we can use public transport like bus, train even share car with stranger to produce the emissions. Additionally, invest solar, build wind to have renewable energy for the future. Furthermore, we manage the rainforestes by plant more trees, less cutting is not necessary. For example, my university organized some programes to connect student and educate how to save our surrounding environment by small action.
In conclusion, it is evident that global warming. However, we can improve this problem by another ways. Government should use law, education to communicate people. Everyone must work together to protect our life to avoid fact which can make rice earth’s temperature.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 66, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...ed to burning fossill fuel. This may be because of the fact that most of people use private transports e...
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Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...l. This may be because of the fact that most of people use private transports everyday and smo...
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Line 3, column 129, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...t most of people use private transports everyday and smokes from factories in the world....
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Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...m transport too much. However, we are have many solutions for this problem. Firstl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39662447257 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73939440775 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.696202531646 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2633904523 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.2352941176 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9411764706 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05882352941 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0837833936399 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0300358322307 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831287378934 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0622391705251 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073847237084 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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