Nowadays many countries have very cosmopolitan cities with people from all over the world.
How can the government ensure all these people can live together harmoniously?
With the impact of globalization, many cities have become multicultural with people from all parts of the world. These people with different cultural and linguistic backgrounds are likely to face misunderstanding and other difficulties. It is the authority that should hold responsibility to create harmony among various groups in society. The essay will suggest viable measures that the government can apply in order to achieve that purpose.
First of all, introducing laws to regulate behaviours regarding racism should be prioritized by the lawmakers. When these laws are applied, violent racist actions will be punished accordingly, which can prevent the similar behaviours. By abiding by these laws, people from minority groups are defended against discrimination, thus they can contribute more to the social development, which in turn create a balanced and harmonious society
Secondly, to avoid racial conflicts in cosmopolitan settings, educators are advised to include subjects on multicultural society and designed activities for students from various cultures to learn about each other’s cultures. These subjects may teach students about cultures and languages of the countries of origin of the students. The activities can be cultural festivals where children can learn about their friends’ customs and habits. Through these activities, understanding among children of various backgrounds can be boosted and the children may become more tolerant to differences.
To sum up, the authority can facilitate mutual understanding and tolerance among people from different backgrounds by introducing laws against racism as well as by including school subjects on how to engage in multicultural settings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as well as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.85714285714 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18407317684 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575396825397 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 95.5299269452 49.4020404114 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.181818182 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3636363636 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30918761039 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110613165089 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836651479408 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183811883844 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086808248922 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.0 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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