Restrictions On Ownerships Of Mobile Phones
Mobile phones have left a big mark on our time and have completely changed the way of everyday life for majority of the population. In recent years, they have been becoming increasingly common. They are small computers, designed to fit in our hands and be carried around throughout our daily life. I think humankind benefits a lot from this technological and engineering advancement. However, there are downsides to their use, and a lot of people will argue their ownership should be restricted in some way.
We are living in the Information age. Information is the most important and most valuable thing right now. Mobile phone is the device which makes sharing that same information possible, just by reaching to our pocket and pressing one or two buttons. They proved very useful and in modern time it is very rare to find a person who does not own at least one cell phone. Moreover, I think it is a very bad idea to restrict their ownership. They are integral part of our lives and it is very hard to imagine how it would look like without them. Not to mention the anger that would trigger in ordinary people which are highly dependant on them. It would be hard to be done in practice, and there would be a risk of riots breaking out. Even if such governments’ decision passed in peace, there would be a real possibility of development of mobile phone black market.
Nevertheless, a non negligible(significant) number of people will argue they should be restricted. They claim that signals produced from mobile phones harm our health. Supporters of this idea also say people in general become too occupied with their phones and that children should not be allowed to spend so much time using it. To some extent, I agree.
To conclude, although there might be negative consequences from the excessive use of smartphones, I think they have become necessary for (a necessity in ) our lives.However, I do think young people should be careful and manage their time with phones better, but I feel like it is the parents’ obligation to upbring their children in such way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, at least, i feel, i think, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84357541899 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8473444197 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550279329609 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.0672451857 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2631578947 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8421052632 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207408569394 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605889081404 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757768501206 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125161495371 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557370908355 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.