In recent years some countries have experienced very rapid economic development. This has resulted in much higher standards of living in urban areas but not in the countryside.
This situation may bring some problems for the country as a whole. What are these problems? How might they be reduced?
It is irrefutable that in this ultramodern era, urbanization has been snowballing across the globe due to which the growth of the nation has surged. However, the development of villages has been dwindling. This essay will analyze the impact of causes and also the solution with a logical conclusion in the ensuing paragraphs.
To embark, by stating demerits of this trend, the first and foremost one being the unemployment ratio would increase in the village because skilled workers can get a job in the metro city, so multinational companies will not expand their business in the rural area. As a consequence, people who are living in the village have to depend on whether agriculture or labor work. Furthermore, the population of the city would escalate owing to this which leads to many illegal activities such as crime, robbery, murder, and rape. As a ramification, it promotes the negative impact on not only children but also all city dwellers.
Conversely, the government should motivate companies to open new branches in the rural side by which transportation and employment would be proliferated. Moreover, the law and enforce cement authority should understand the gravity of the situation regarding the primary requirement of the countryside such as education, healthcare, water as well as electricity. Therefore, it leads to incase the living standard of people of rural. Besides this, people could start their own business rather than the farming industry.
in the final analysis, the reflection exhibited to the above statement leads to firmly assert that the government should spend an equal budget on the rural and urban side for the development of all citizens. If they will not act judiciously then it will lead to repercussion, which could turn out to be a recipe for disaster, waiting to happen in the year to come
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, conversely, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14666666667 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93745165445 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596666666667 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8292733144 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.769230769 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0866129715633 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0295124939841 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0214775530349 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0502045990367 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00321204793053 0.056905535591 6% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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