Some people think women should be given equal chances to work and excel in their careers. Others believe that a woman’s role should be limited to taking care of the house and children. Which opinion do you agree with and why? Include specific details and examples to support your choice.
The importance of women should be given equal chances to work and excel in their careers which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked r the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my views for favoring the positive impact of the trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further elaborate this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that women should be given equal chances to work and excel in their careers. women are matching their shoulders with men in each and every field .For instance, Women are also in high position rather than men.Women can accomplish each and every task. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is that women are cares the whole family and do also work. Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.
Elaborating my viewpoint, there are some more merits but one of the crucial effects is that now women are posted on high position for instance, IT officer, doctor and pilot. Besides, women never give up in problems. she fights with every problem like fighters. Hence, it is apparent why many are talking this trend.
According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits if women should be given equal chances to work and excel in their careers are indeed too great.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, so, thus, while, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91729323308 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4309911361 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556390977444 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2703240712 50.4703680194 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.615384615 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285024563527 0.242375264174 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923088071215 0.0925447433944 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100082467058 0.071462118173 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180277140357 0.151781067708 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066966830011 0.0609392437508 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.