One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
High life expectancy is one of the factors, which all countries in the world want to obtain. Extended life is a result of the scientific achievement of the last twenty or thirty years. Although prolonging life expectancy leads to the problems of overpopulation, I believe that humanity with a long life provides crucial advantages.
Discovering new ways to fight terminal illnesses such as cancer or hypertension affects magnification life on every person in the world. Overpopulation is one of the biggest problems, because in 2020 there are approximately 7 billion people are living on the planet called the Earth. In Asia, especially in China, about two billion people try to coexist on the mainland where this country is located. A few years ago, the Chinese government had accepted the law, which has restricted having more than two children in a family. In other words, if the Chinese government had not passed the law, the Chinese population would have grown rapidly.
Homo sapiens definitely is one of the precious and unique species on the Blue planet. Every person wants his close relative to live as long as possible. Most people value every second in their life to share with someone very close. Scientists, writers, doctors and a dozen people who have achieved something must continue their way in a happy future. Scientific advancement provides opportunities to develop new technologies that expand human-being life. This is why the importance of medical advances' promotion will be helpful for human race.
In conclusion, the necessity of new ways to medical care is what allows the generations to live longer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88792923727 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633962264151 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.5764477581 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.8666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203576682675 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625003572409 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447430837337 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127367517261 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313708439639 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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