Some people believe that modern innovations bring a lot more problem than benefits.
Do you agree or disagree?
The scientists, researchers and engineers work continuos to innovate new things. Some people argue that these innovations have a more adverse impact on society than the benefits. However, I believe that advancements in various fields have helped humans in various ways.
The modern innovations have made our life much easier. All the daily chores such as washing clothes or utensils can be accomplished by the machines, whereas in earlier days people used to do these tasks manually. Adding to this, there are various modes of transportation available, nowadays, because of which travelling has become more comfortable in contrast to the earlier days. From the motorbike to the aeroplane, for instance, all forms of transportation are the result of continuous research.
Furthermore, advancements in the field of medical science have made human life less miserable. In earlier days, the people not only used to live a painful life but also many of them die because of diseases. Considering the availability of modern types of equipment and advanced medicines these days, the probability of recovering from life-threatening diseases have increased.
On the other hand, some people believe that the advancements are responsible for global warming and nuclear weapons. Although they are right to some extent, the way humans are using the innovations gave birth to these problems. The over usage of fossil fuels as well as not using nuclear energy for the purpose it was invented are the main reasons.
To conclude, in my opinion, innovations have made human life much comfortable. However, the way humans are utilizing them may impact society adversely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, whereas, for instance, in contrast, such as, as well as, in contrast to, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37164750958 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94122636408 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0982376167 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4666666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160664846976 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556418791024 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059475361705 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896146078471 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550987148909 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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