Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems.
These days, increasing inhabitants of the big cities are making several problems. This essay will discuss the main issues related to the citizens and suggest some possible solutions to avoid them.
The main matter is unemployment and pollution because of the growing number of townsfolk. Most of the people come to cities for education or to find a job, but it is not simple to achieve something in big competitions. For example, if 8 employees should work in a cafe in China, it is 6 times less than applying for a job. What is more, pollution can be another reason, caused by cars. It is because most of the family members prefer using their own cars, in that case, it brings harmful air to us.
In my opinion, a possible solution to this problem would be the government can solve this difficulty by making new orders. Firstly, the administration has to open universities and colleagues in small towns, as a result, new job places will open and nobody will move the land where they were born. In addition, one immediate practical solution is for protecting the fresh air the authority also has to discover a method about to reduce using cars and the best way is to improve public transportations. In other words, promoting vehicles would decrease the level of air pollution.
In conclusion, rising numbers of the population of urban areas have to lead to some problems such as jobless and worth effects climate. The most successful solution would be to make better facilities in the regions to attract citizens.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... decrease the level of air pollution. In conclusion, rising numbers of the popul...
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Line 4, column 237, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ies in the regions to attract citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83524904215 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73994851427 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628352490421 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4374428905 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0769230769 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3846153846 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.057862461418 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0189136184702 0.084324248473 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524524328785 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0420456276142 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598291828948 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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