Some people believe that children's leisure activities must be educational,otherwise they are a complete waste of time.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience
It is irrefutable to say that since individuals are provided vast knowledge or education at schools, they are also given some extra time to spend on their leisure activities. Although a certain section of society denotes that to utilize the benefit of studies, the fun activities for children must be educational, while others negate the aforementioned thought and suggest not to include education during fun activities. However, I strongly accord with the later statement that children must be given independence to perform leisure activities.
To begin with, let us shed some light on the fact of not including education in student's extra-curricular activities. First and foremost, since leisure activities mean to be done for the sake of fun, it brings the best of cognitive skills among pupils. To explicate, when children are set aloof to perform fun activities, they tend to think distinctly during doing the activities. Not only does it enhance their level of thinking through brain exercise, but also elevates their creativity skills. To exemplify, a famous psychoanalyst, Jean Piaget in his book "The psychology of a child" had clearly stated that a child's brain develops at a faster pace when they are set to do their leisure activities independently.
Furthermore, when a child is indulged in leisure activities, they utilize their best knowledge which gives rise to their creative skills. To elaborate, if children are left to think freely, during fun activities, they learn from themselves to fulfill the fun task. This, in turn, will help the children in the long run and there may be a possibility that the fun activity which they are involved in today, may turn as a profession in the later stage of their life. For instance, Mark Zuckerberg, the creator of Facebook, a social networking website, had once created a social website for his friends when he was in college and later on it turned out to be his very successful profession.
To recapitulate, I would suggest that if children are set free to work on their hobbies, it may produce fruitful consequences in their lives. Hence, one must not impose education aspects in their extra-curriculum activities in order to make their passion, a profession.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'enhance'?
Suggestion: enhance
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Message: Did you mean 'enhance'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: enhance
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, while, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1878.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15934065934 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01105418234 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541208791209 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.2580558792 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.142857143 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18944568048 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721439915051 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332535183146 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123590790148 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473918086021 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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