TPO 14
Travelling is one aspect in our lives. Many people have different opinions about travelling either going to one’s own country or to other countries. In my opinion, I strongly believe that to cross our country is more beneficial than travelling to foreign countries. I feel in this way for a couple of reasons; I will explain those reasons in the following essay.
To begin with, if we travel inside our country, we will know about our culture. We will have more ideas and knowledge about our traditions. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I as twenty-three years old, I visited many cities in my country, and I saw many cultures which are different from each other. Moreover, I was surprised because I thought we have the same language but it was not. Now, I know in my country we have a variety of sublanguages which are different from East to West and from North to South. In addition, l knew this information, when a girl become a bride, the man who will marry her should give her mother and grandmother some gifts. In my region, we don’t have this tradition. Therefore, when someone from another country meets and asks me about my traditions, I will tell them very well about our various cultures. That is why I think it is better to travel inside our country.
Additionally, when we travel to another country, we will spend more money on tickets, hotels, luxury restaurants. On the other hand, when we visit our country, we can cross the country by car. Thus, it will not cost us money because we don’t need to buy tickets. We can eat from streets’ restaurants which are less expensive than luxury restaurants. For instance, I have a friend like travelling by car, she crossed The U.S.A by her car. She enjoyed during the trip, she didn’t spent money on hotels because she stayed in motels. That is another reason why I prefer travelling inside one’s own country.
Furthermore, families will spend more time with each other during the trip especially vacations. They can share their stories, advices and experience. Moreover, children can play games with their parents and having fun. Consequently, this will eliminate barriers between members of family, and this will increase the strength of relationship between parents and their children. That is why I agree that visiting other cities in our country is more beneficial than going abroad outside.
To conclude, I think travelling inside one’s own country is better than going abroad outside. We will learn about our countries, traditions, cultures and we will save money and increase relationships between families.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, i feel, i think, in addition, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 74.0 43.0788530466 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2182.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 442.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93665158371 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69456158746 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484162895928 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 653.4 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 26.0 9.59856630824 271% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5683409656 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9285714286 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7857142857 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.88709677419 286% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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