The number of people getting higher who wearing fashionable clothes. It is a good or bad situation.
In today's globalized urbanised and the over-populated world more and more individuals are wearing fashionable clothes in order to improving their personality in real life. There are those who say that it is benificial for the people who wear expensive clothes however others believe that individuals should not wear fashionable clothes because there are many worse reasons behind it. I think it is a bad situation and in this essay I will examine both sides of the contentious argument and provide an overall opinion.
From an overall perspective, perhaps the most compelling reason why masses are wearing fashionable clothes is because they wants to become more handsome than other people. For example, A recent research concluded that 65% of people who lived in the North America, they purchased fashionable clothes from European countries in every month. A further point in favour of this idea could be that Unless masses wear expensive clothes, they would not attend functions, such as Marrege ceremonies and Birthday parties. Unlike in the past people used to wear simple clothes but these days In the Era of modernization each and every person wants to adopt latest fashion.
Despite these arguments, there are also a case for the idea that why wearing fashionable clothes is a bad situation. Firstly, If poor people to see latest design clothes but they can not afford it. The result of this phenomenon could be that they will feel lonely, isolated and alienated which in turn leads to personal problems like as depression and alcoholism. The decision as to whether individuals should wear cheepr clothes must be seen in the context of the entire society.
To sum up, this is a topic which is very relevant to contemporary society. Overall I would have to say that wearing fashionable clothes is a bad situation. If government implement high taxes on expensive clothes, it will be more desirable for future generations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, as to, for example, i think, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13880126183 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74492545055 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536277602524 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6513297722 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.357142857 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317230907913 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11496569148 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885690836763 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203862054303 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644402642193 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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