Corona Virus is becoming a big problem for todays' Society as a result of it thousands of people are suffering as well as govenrments losing a big part of budget. While COVID 19 is treating the globe from polluting and other affects of humanity.
It is true that Corona Virus is being a main mystery for todays’ Society as a outcome of it thousands of people are lossing as well as governments destroying a great unit of budget.While Covid 19 is curing the earth from soiling and other affects of people.I believe that other more effective methods should be taken into considerations.
On the one hand,there are various reasons why many people are suffering from Corona Virus.Nowadays,many people are infected this virus by contact with someone who is ill with Covid 19.They think that we must observe cleanliness for not making dirty it, presently.And,we must stay at home. Scientists search for its treatment.Consequently, many vaccines are tried out on volunteers by them.
International public reserves are created by United Nations against it.Some people believe that they will find its cure soon.
On the other hand,Government say that we must do mask on our face,also when our temperature go up we must go to the hospital. Its first indications are dry cough and raising of heat.If we have a sensation of its sign, we never leave our home.Moreover,
Doctors advise to wash our hands by soap very soon.And, we should to not go public places because of this virus.For example: shops, cities and other places .
In conclusion, it seems to me that applying other methods would be highly advantageous, although they must close all public areas and airports for fighting against Corona Virus.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1217.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11344537815 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17520571597 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638655462185 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.4992874216 49.4020404114 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 173.857142857 106.682146367 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0 20.7667163134 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.1428571429 7.06120827912 257% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192689369524 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865628618086 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858405654801 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968283893804 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872163749571 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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