You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope.
Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter:
explain why you are writing
express concern about the missing card
ask them what they intend to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is samvedna Puri, dweller of Haward Street, North London. I am feeling anxious while inscribing this piece of epistle to inquire about the missing master card from the envelop despatched by your institution at my address.
Since, it has been one month that i submitted my request to issue me a multipurpose plastic money yet i have not received it beside a empty envelope. Being a journalist, i have to travel around the world in respect of office work and absence of card is creating alot of inconvenience. Moreover, on the top of that main concernable aspect is misutilisation of the card in unauthorized hands could be deleterious.
Furthermore, kindly look into this matter as soon as possible and bestow me with ace services which are expected from your bank.Therefore, i could draft my itinerary accordingly and It would be highly appreciable if your could apprise me with the legal procedure that i prehaps need to persue at my part.
I anticipate a prompt and positive response from your end at your earliest convenient.
Your Faithfully,
Samvedna Puri.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...uire about the missing master card from the envelop despatched by your institution at my ad...
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Line 5, column 35, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
.... Since, it has been one month that i submitted my request to issue me a mult...
^
Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...money yet i have not received it beside a empty envelope. Being a journalist, i h...
^
Line 7, column 129, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...vices which are expected from your bank.Therefore, i could draft my itinerary accordingly...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 140, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... are expected from your bank.Therefore, i could draft my itinerary accordingly an...
^
Line 7, column 217, Rule ID: YOUR_SHOULD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you'?
Suggestion: you
...y and It would be highly appreciable if your could apprise me with the legal procedu...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03804347826 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01359063198 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.684782608696 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.9473773724 44.8134815571 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.875 76.5299724578 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 4.34317383033 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183841439531 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747635572349 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440285141147 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105101954269 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0149073023381 0.0580467560999 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 8.37731958763 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 70.7449484536 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 7.59969072165 126% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.