There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success. Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre. In your letter:
◾Describe what the problem with the changing rooms is
◾Say what happened the last times you complained
◾Explain what you want the manager to do
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to inform you about the trouble faced in the changing room of the sports center
Let me explain in detail, the air conditioner in the changing room is not working since last many days. I have made the complaint at the service desk many times but till date no action has been taken. Furthermore, the fans in the room are also broken and required to get replaced.
Last Monday, I inform again at the customer care number also, but I think no body is giving the ear to this problem and they are taking it lightly. I am the old member of the center and joined this particular only because of the amenities provided in the center, but I very much dissatisfied with the changing room as it was extremely difficult to change the attire as there is huge suffocation in the room.
I request you to please look into the manager and get the Air conditioner repaired quickly. I can understand that it will take some time till then a potable fan can solve the problem to some extend.
Hope to get the quick solution from you.
Yours faithfully
Maninder
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 75, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'nobody'?
Suggestion: nobody
... customer care number also, but I think no body is giving the ear to this problem and t...
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Line 9, column 93, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t the Air conditioner repaired quickly. I can understand that it will take some t...
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Line 9, column 192, Rule ID: SOME_EXTEND[1]
Message: Did you mean 'extent' ("extent" is a noun, "extend" is a verb)?
Suggestion: extent
...table fan can solve the problem to some extend. Hope to get the quick solution from...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, so, then, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54545454545 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37801033852 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621212121212 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.072037009 44.8134815571 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289483816742 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885302429896 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624752696899 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141295572785 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769226448269 0.0580467560999 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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