The unlimited use of cars may cause many problems. What are those problems? In order to reduce the problems, should we discourage people to use cars?
It is an inescapable fact that automobile ownership has become commonplace in recent times. However, the frequent use of cars is likely to result in several major problems. Some people assert that everyone should be dissuaded from driving cars so as to minimize these problems. Personally, I do not agree with this viewpoint for some reasons.
To begin with, the unlimited use of automobiles might cause serious problems to the environment and human health. Firstly, increasing car use can lead to a corresponding rise in the amount of exhaust fumes released into the atmosphere. Consequently, air pollution would occur and cause a variety of disastrous environmental impacts such as ozone depletion or acid rain. Secondly, air pollutants from automobiles such as carbon dioxide can have undesirable effects on people’s health. In fact, people living in big cities where a large number of cars are driven on the roads every day run a higher risk of asthma and other respiratory diseases than those in rural areas.
In my opinion, discouraging everyone from using cars to travel between places is not a workable solution to all the aforementioned problems. It is argued by some that when the government implements a policy that limits car use, fewer individuals would opt for that mode of transport, and the issues relating to the environment or human health can be dealt with. However, this argument seems to overlook the fact that people will quickly look for alternatives to automobiles such as motorcycles, which also contributes greatly to an increase in vehicle exhaust emissions. This means that all the problems mentioned above will remain unsolved. From my point of view, a better solution would be to encourage car manufacturers to shift their focus towards eco-friendly vehicles such as electric cars. Since these vehicles are powered by electricity, they emit less greenhouse gases as well as other air pollutants. Therefore, people need not worry about environmental pollution or health-related problems anymore.
In conclusion, the excessive use of cars can lead to a host of problems to the environment as well as people’s health, and I believe that dissuading individuals from using their cars is not an effective approach to tackling all these issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1912.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23835616438 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00223723423 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575342465753 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5182636343 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.470588235 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4705882353 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5294117647 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293393056168 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090153576369 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779648303996 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19588570076 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528029840113 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.