The natural resources such as oil, forests and freshwater are being consuming at an alarming rate.
What problem does it cause?
How can we solve these problems?
One of the biggest challenges nowadays is how to use natural resources such as oil, forests and freshwater as it is using at a high rate. The most significant problem of this cause is that the future generations may not able to use it as already finished by us and the most viable solution is to consume in a limited way and take alternative measures to safe resources.
The prominent cause of consuming natural resources at a high speed is creating a huge negative impact on the upcoming generations. As all know, natural resources play a vital role in developing the infrastructure, provide food and shelter, increase the pace of development to any nation. If this all resources using at the current pace, then it will not be available for the future. The survival of humans will become more difficult because every nation starts facing competition for getting resources to their citizens. To illustrate, a survey conducted by WHO that almost 87% of people are not able to use natural resources from the onward of 2050 due to the less availability.
To curb this issue, governments have to use minimal and take some preventive measures to control the usage of natural resources. Instead of using natural resources, they can opt for other alternatives. For example, in China, the government has taken a great initiative to minimize the usage of diesel by replacing with nitrogen gas or use electronic power.
In conclusion, the threat of consuming natural resources at a fast pace would end up at a very early stage and in the future, people will not have any type of natural resources. However, this problem can be solved by not using unnecessary and use other alternative resources rather than natural resources.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 305, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a limited way" with adverb for "limited"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... the most viable solution is to consume in a limited way and take alternative measures to safe r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, then, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93470790378 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86419880904 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549828178694 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2538124462 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.666666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260372219496 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995220536131 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792650870428 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167436515999 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831132728252 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.