Many offenders commit more crimes after serving their first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
Criminals who are released from prison after serving their first sentence, often re-offend. This is mainly due to the lack of rehabilitation and challenges they face when re-entering the society. There are a range of solutions that can be implemented to tackle this problem.
The phenomenon of first-time offenders returning to a life of crime after being released can be attributed to a lack of rehabilitation efforts whilst in jail, in other words, there is no retraining and skill enhancement of these individuals. Consequently, they face problems in re-integrating in to the society, as they find it hard to find employment, and financial struggles lead them to commit crimes again. Furthermore, there is a lack of focus on imparting the importance of correct moral behavior in jail, on the contrary they are able to interact with hardened criminals, which, increases their resolve to offend again.
The problem of criminals who are released after serving their first jail time can be solved by providing adequate rehabilitation opportunities. They need to be taught job-oriented skills and programs so that they can sustain themselves when they are released back in the society and do not fall prey to the lure of crime again. This will be the most reliable and effective method of breaking the cycle of crime which they can fall in to otherwise. Another way this trend of re-offending can be stopped, is by monitoring and regular checking of criminals once released. This will ensure that they are staying away from trouble and will act as a deterrent if they know that they are being monitored and kept an eye on.
In conclusion, first-time criminals committing crimes after serving out their prison sentence can be best dealt with a combination of proper rehabilitation and oversight once they are out of prison.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 200, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... oversight once they are out of prison.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, so, in conclusion, in other words, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08666666667 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99383811631 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526666666667 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.1706213099 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.166666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308323956385 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138351120717 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739434485632 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216288899054 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501976382251 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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