Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In the world of today, there are various languages available in this universe and in day to day life some are erased because of the world depending on some languages. some people say that it is beneficial for living life. I totally disagree with this sentence and today I discuss about this topic.
In the first place, Language is a mark of culture and if this is eradicated then the culture is automatically lost. People are staying in different countries for finding a job and convert their own language to their work language. foe example, the village side in India every 10 km language is change and all villages people shifting in the city for work and all speak one language.
Furthermore, All language has special characteristic so some entertainment program seems good in some language. Such as, Gujrati languages are Important for Garba, and is this not available in other languages and the English Language is important for Internation Businesses. Whats is more, language through identifies a Person country so they person does more and more business in another country, because of their country relation. For an illustrator, One Indian nation people go to another nation, and there meet her countryman and they help their nation people.
In conclusion, All people must learn one or more extra languages because of business purpose but they did not forget their own language. All countries must have to save the culture and this depends on the language.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, then, in conclusion, such as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01224489796 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68226936187 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534693877551 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2990202886 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.333333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4166666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287852816516 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114133777696 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637137811829 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185217872033 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786838749805 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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