Nowadays it is not only large companies that can be able to make films. Digital technology enables anyone to produce films. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
It is true that the advent of technology allows not only professional companies but also other filmmakers to produce films. While this has several benefits, I believe that overall the drawbacks are more significant.
Admittedly, the positive effect of this trend is that it encourages amateur filmmakers to pursue their dreams. A colossal number of film producers today want to make their own film, but they are thwarted with different obstacles such as lack of finance or insufficient human resources. Therefore, digital technology affords filmmakers opportunities to make their desire a reality and prove their qualification. For instance, a Vietnam film called “The third wife” produced by an independent filmmaker won Netpac Award for World or International Film Premiere in Toronto Festival, 2018. Not only is this film a hit with audiences and critics but also it proves the fact that anyone can make a high-quality film as long as they have a strong desire.
Despite the advantage mentioned above, I believe they are negated by the following problem. Because a film is not produced by large companies, there is no certainty of its quality. Digital technology can create unfeigned effects and images, which does not meet the standard and audiences’ requirements. Take Phuong Khau, a Vietnam film, as an example. In the scene which reproduces the coronation of Thieu Tri King, due to the lack of extras, filmmakers used digital technology to multiply the quantities of people. However, because of being processed carelessly, this scene on the screen leaves a major disappointment to audiences because it does not live up to their expectations.
In conclusion, although that technology allows anyone to produce a film has several benefits, I believe that they are outweighed by the problem mentioned above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, third, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3044982699 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00049284953 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570934256055 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2859808093 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334146445446 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104069546893 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562589072967 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183335963473 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537501789885 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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