Some people think that technological advances have brought more harm than good. Do you agree or disagree?
In all times technological advancement has improved our lives in different spheres. However, currently, some humans believe that these benefits have delivered more bane than boon. I totally disagree with this statement and believe that technologies are making our life better.
Firstly, contemporary technologies approach humanity towards space. In other words, due to the previous statement the humanity could go into outer space and land on the moon. Therefore, this development process leads humanity beyond our solar system to explore new universes and black holes. For example, Neil Armstrong was the first human who has ever landed on the moon, and he said:”That's one small step for a man, one giant leap for mankind», he made it owing to technological progress in those times. Thus, nowadays, because of the rapid development of technology, humanity can fly to Mars, without technology, people would have lived in the ancient age.
Secondly, technological breakthroughs are accelerating the process of production food and other needs. This means that people can buy any food in the store because it is mass produced. Likewise, each human can order delivery to their house specifying several parameters for shipment and the address where that person lives. For instance, an application called “Delivery Club” you choose which store you require the products from and products you need and specify the delivery address and in a few hours you will obtain what you need. Hence, technology nowadays speeds up simple processes and improves people's lives.
To conclude, I strongly disagree with the statement since the fact that technological benefits are enhancing the level of human’s life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43609022556 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8143611423 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657894736842 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1369797259 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.285714286 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18121488279 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601082361541 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460826098494 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112035095611 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582375080328 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.