Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this
Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Time is altering and so is the general view on educating children to act well on society. Although some individuals believe that children should be taught how to be a good citizen in society by parents, others claim that this is schools’ duty. This controversial issue will be demonstrated by this essay that why parents play a crucial role in children’s behavior in society but why schools’ duty takes the lead.
On the one hand, without any shadow of doubt raising a sociable and well-mannered child is essential for every society and also parents can incredibly make this issue occurred by educating their children. The reason behind is, not only do parents spend half of their lives in the society and socialize with a wide range of people who have come from various educational backgrounds, but they are also aware of their children personality traits, which they may well change it and teach them how to behave in society to be considered as civilized people. A clear example is that, when I was a knee-high to a grasshopper, I used to fight with my friends to gain what I wanted. Even so, my father taught me how to resist on my rights without any challenges. To cut the long story short, parents are playing an important role to raise a good person for society.
On the other hand, it cannot be denied that children require to be taught to perform well in society by schools. If students behave nicely in schools, they will become respectful citizens in society since schools can be considered as small communities. Furthermore, students spend 1/5 of their lives in schools with different teachers and people so that they are able to gain a lot of experiences from them. More importantly, teachers should expose students to real situations to teach them a good performance. According to Guardian site, for instance, 80 percent of students, who are exposed to the real life, are capable of communicating well with different characteristics. To make all this happen, schools should teach them to socialize well in the society.
To sum up, there is a controversial issue between individuals that children should be taught how to behave in society whether by parents or schools. This essay discussed both sides in detail and provides reasons as why parents play crucial role in this aspect but why schools’ role is superior. In my opinion, schools should win the battle since it is a small community and children can be exposed to real life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, well, even so, for instance, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2047.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 420.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87380952381 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77474335395 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488095238095 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 618.3 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7068513375 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.411764706 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7058823529 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32550831947 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108889613792 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820522034511 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225040847711 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770303229381 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.