In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done about this problem?
Although there is a significant advancement in agriculture in today's world, starvation around the World still remains at a high rate. This essay will discuss the main causes of hungriness including lack of knowledge about the modern method of agriculture and the availability of devices used in cultivation. This will also suggest by decreasing the price of available technologies and increasing the appropriate knowledge can overcome this problem.
It is true to say that lack of proper education about harvesting crops is the cause of hunger in various countries. In addition, these countries cannot by this modern technology to improve their agriculture. The social and economic conditions of these countries are so vulnerable due to civil war, lack of communications and proper infrastructure, lack of natural resources such as Petroleum oil, gas, etc. as well as lack of available landscape for cultivation. For example, the African country namely Sudan is effected from long from Civil war which led to unending starvation. Therefore, despite available technologies and knowledge, these cannot be utilized properly to remove hunger from the country.
Necessary steps should be taken to decrease the price of available products such as pesticides, instruments, and instruments for farming processes. Furthermore, the appropriate knowledge should be transferred to the root level farmers. Through these activities, people of these countries would able to produce enough food and learn to collect and use this all year round. The world communities should take the necessary steps to stop the civil war or conflicts of these countries will increase the life expectancy of the inhabitants. For instance, in Yemen, the main cause of starvation is Saudi Arabia's so-called war. Finally, the government of these countries should take the necessary step to reduce the hunger of their residence.
In conclusion, hunger all over the world is still a problem in the recent world. This essay discussed the lack of education and modern equipment cause this problem is suggested both the Government and the world should provide knowledge and devices for the people of those countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, if, so, still, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1845.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44247787611 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99055692214 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516224188791 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8770602075 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.529411765 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9411764706 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58823529412 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203643101041 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674716668247 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702012738124 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155671315494 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108529551419 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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