Universities should allocate the same amount of money to students’ sports activities as they allocate to their libraries. Do you agree?
Colleges and universities should give equal importance to studies and physical activities like sports by providing a proper funding to both. I disagree with the statement and this essay will elaborate it further.
A library is a paramount need in any educational institution. More money should be allocated to the libraries, as they harbour books, replete with information. Latest versions of books and books by eminent authors cost a fortune. Also, colleges and schools are places built to accommodate an atmosphere where a student is easily able to focus on their studies. A well maintained library will need proper funding to offer updated books, magazines and periodical, which in turn, will attract more readers. Hence, a pristine and a place filled with information will be helpful to future generations.
On the other hand, sports activities should also be encouraged in universities but, it is not wise to spend too much money on it. There are many sports which can be played without any specific equipment. Also, sports like cricket does not need much investment. Delegating too much financial resources to build a tennis court in a college, will be an unnecessary waste of money. For the enthusiasts of sports, there are many sports club available, which students can enroll and enjoy their leisure time playing their favourite game with all amenities.
In conclusion, it is essential to give money for both studies as well as sports activities, but spending a hefty amount of money for sports in a university seems illogical. A well University should spend its money judicially for betterment of its students
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Latest'.
Suggestion: The Latest
...arbour books, replete with information. Latest versions of books and books by eminent ...
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Line 7, column 63, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...ssential to give money for both studies as well as sports activities, but spending a hefty...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, thus, well, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17045454545 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84902628236 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57196969697 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7892400912 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275187221874 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080965332217 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691190124172 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152040644874 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336513424598 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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