People are consuming more and more sugar-based drinks. Why? What can be done to reduce sugary drink consumption?
Drinks with a high amount of sugar become popular in daily beverage list. Many reasons can be given to explain this phenomenon which necessitates the implementation of appropriate measures to address this issue.
There are many factors leading to the fact that people choose sugar-based drink as their favourite drink. Firstly, its taste is accepted easily by our sense because of how comfortable it is. Different from spicy, sweet is more pleasant than it can adapt with people in various ages, genders and the more sugar is consumed, the higher level of sweetness that our bodies need. This leads to an adverse tendency which brings diseases to the digestive system such as diabetes, slow metabolism. Secondly, advertisement is affecting directly to our awareness. The way of those commercial influences our society is exaggerating the effects of sugar-based beverages so that people will give credit to what is popular nowadays.
Various measures can be taken to redress this situation. The government can impose a restriction on this type of drink and create a limit in sugar level for each 100ml of beverage. By doing this, a lot of companies will have to cut down some products because of high reproduce fee. Moreover, to make consumers drink less by themselves, gaining medical knowledge may be the most powerful solution. Doctors or someone who specializes in this field can co-operate with influencers to spread the information so that it will be easier to stimulate the development of awareness.
In conclusion, although sugar-based drinks gain popularity from many causes, steps can be taken to alleviate this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2319391635 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86621911531 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623574144487 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2052058639 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2857142857 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304279083848 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966077371556 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809822378852 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181679215997 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448317794257 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.