Some people think that spending a lot on holding wedding parties, birthday parties and other celebrations is just a waste of money. Others, however, think that these are necessary for individuals and the society. Discuss.
It is generally argued that, spending a huge amount of money on wedding, birthday parties and other festivities is inappropriate, while others opine that these celebrations are cultural traditions that are essential for the society as well as the people. This essay will discuss both the sides of argument in detail.
The sole purpose of a celebration is to provide a reason to organise a social gathering. But nowadays, a pre-wedding cocktail dinner or a birthday party of a 18 year old teenager has become a show-off trend. For a filthy rich family, these extravagant gatherings are part of their social life, while for others who cannot afford such luxuries, it becomes a matter of disappointed. Moreover, these type of grand events pose a serious inequality issue in a society.
On the other hand, human beings are social animals and socializing is inevitable for them. Socializing also creates harmony among communities. There are several festivals, which not only promotes human interaction but also teaches about cultural history of a particular region. For instance, in a country like India, which filled with cultural diversity, celebrates numerous festival throughout the year, which are associated with one or another mythical story. These type of celebration, although being costly, becomes a source of knowledge, important for future generations to learn.
All in all, it is really necessary for humans to stay I touch with each other and these celebrations are a perfect way to do it, but spending lot, just to prove the power of money is not ideal. Too much money should not be wasted on mere events like a birthday party which comes every year, but a judicious use of money in festival is wise.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, really, so, well, while, for instance, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0777385159 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82570648042 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614840989399 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3636754065 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.538461538 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304219808513 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883044768707 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855592307113 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194838293733 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086691104901 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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