Some people think that cars are best way to travel in a city while other think that bicycle is better.discuss both view and give your opinion?
In the contemporary era, travelling is increasing day by day due to some personal and professional reasons. some people think that cars are the best for travel. While, others beleive that bicycle is beneficial for individuals for moving one place to another. However, I will go with the latter view. In this essay, I will discuss both views along with my opinion and relevant examples in upcoming paragraph.
To commence with, some persons think that bicycle is the best option for travelling due to these reasons. The predominant is environment safety as there is no need of petrol as well as diesel in case of bicycle and cause no air pollution and noise pollution also. Secondly, they beleive that cycling is the form of exercise. it makes the person hale and hearty. By doing cycling, individuals feel active and it act as a stress - buster. Last but not the least reason is cheap price. The bicycle cost is affordable and everybody can afford this vehicle.
On the other hand, some people think that cars are better. Primarily,they think that they saves their time as individuals reach their destination in a short period of time. For example, if the humans urgently go to somewhere then they will use car . So, they go to their palace with fast speed. The other cause is its size is massive. In one time more than three people can go to their destination in one time as it is four or five seated vehicle.
To conclude, after having deep insight on both methodologies, I think that although , cars are good for our travelling purpose but cars are the best for environment as well as for humans.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, as for, for example, i think, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78571428571 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59583388945 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553571428571 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6114621594 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.5263157895 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7368421053 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52631578947 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313543996388 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964024241369 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130182093943 0.0667982634062 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186522395616 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759907229598 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.