Some school leavers travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to the university. What are the advantages and disadvantages.
In the world of today, people prefer to understand this globe and therefore they do some work experience and traveling after complete school life and before going to college. This situation has both merits as wall demerits which I shall discuss in this essay.
In the first place, school pass students do not have maturity so they can not understand the whole field. In addition, they want some basic knowledge of stream because they easily choose the best career field for your further future. For example, Science stream students have lots of fields so they confused. Consequently, This is the right way to pick-up the best opportunity field.
Moreover, traveling is the best way to refreshment in modern life. Nowadays, individuals also prefer some refreshments after their secondary school. Furthermore, Family member often supports their student to gain knowledge through traveling. Another reason is that they see another person's life-styles and understand how to live in this world.
On the downside, when people work and get income due to they think they have self-dependant and not interest in university study. Another disadvantage is that they feel bored after traveling and then they not focus on study. Both situations are dangerous for their future life.
In conclusion, I pen down saying that this gap year has various advantages provide so well planned it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1163.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23873873874 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6447579747 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612612612613 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8332953293 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0714285714 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8571428571 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5714285714 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141787435819 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485292642631 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436739487986 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0763477560328 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314321712958 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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