Many people claim that there are more disadvantages of car as compared to advantages. Do you agree or disagree ?
There is no denying the fact that, in the contemporary era, everyone becomes a globe trotter. They travel from one place to another by their vehicles such as car. Some people think that car has more demerits as compared to its benefits. I completely disagree with this statement. In this essay, I will prove my opinion with the help of relevant examples in upcoming paragraph.
To commence with, there are plethora benefits of four-wheel vehicle. The predominant is time- saver automobile. People can travel from one place to other with a short period of time. For instance, individuals finish the 50 or 60 kilometers journey within hours which is beneficial for the humans. Apart from this, many people can travelling together in a car. When there is any emergency situation or go to any ocassion, more than 5 individuals sit in four - wheel vehicle comfortably.
Continuing further, car is a private automobile of someone. Anybody can bring their four wheel vehicle and began a journey. They are not dependent on other people for travelling purpose. They move one place to another any time according to their wish. Last but not least, people can bring their heavy things in the car without any difficulty. For example, if family members or friends want to go for a long trip, then they will use their car because they can brings their belongings also. Along with this, good - ventilation is given in the four wheel automobile. Moreover, cars are the best for human beings.
On the contrary, most people beleive that car has also drawbacks such as air pollution. Petrol and diesel are required for the operate of car and they cause the air pollution which is harmful for the persons and cause infections such as respiratory, digestive etectera.
To conclude, although four- wheel vehicle have some disadvantage but its merits are more and it is useful thing for the individuals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...el from one place to other with a short period of time. For instance, individuals finish the 5...
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Line 5, column 377, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...culty. For example, if family members or friends want to go for a long trip, then...
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Line 5, column 461, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'bring'
Suggestion: bring
...hey will use their car because they can brings their belongings also. Along with this,...
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Line 5, column 485, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ecause they can brings their belongings also. Along with this, good - ventilation is...
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Line 7, column 124, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ion. Petrol and diesel are required for the operate of car and they cause the air pollution...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, apart from, for example, for instance, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96214511041 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64721617205 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574132492114 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8756053889 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.5 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4090909091 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155191706502 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515039269954 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059716779482 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927113376916 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252409902416 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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