The disadvantages of tourism in less developed countries are as great as the advantages. What is your opinion?
With the ease in transportation globally, tourism has increased significantly. Tourism has many benefits for undeveloped countries as well as many demerits. This essay will discuss how its advantages outweigh disadvantages.
First of all. tourism is a source of income. When tourists travel to a certain destination, business in that area prosper as tourists spend their money for staying in hotels, buying local made things and several other things. For instance, tourism in Switzerland highly contributes to its economy. Therefore, with increase in tourism economy prospers.
Secondly, local people of the area have the interaction with different people coming from all over the world. As mostly naturally beautifully locations are far from cities and these areas have limited access or people in these area have interaction with limited people which is a hindrance in their vision. When people from different part of world comes and they connect with them it helps in developing their vision about life. For example, Northern areas of Pakistan such as Chitral's literacy rate has increased once tourism in that area started. Hence, it is helpful in improving the understanding of life among illiterate local people.
In conclusion, tourism helps in improving economy and literacy rate of the area as well as of a country. In my opinion tourism have far more advantages than disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Tourism
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Message: Did you mean 'this area' or 'these areas'?
Suggestion: this area; these areas
... areas have limited access or people in these area have interaction with limited people wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1185.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41095890411 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87882795294 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575342465753 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.8774361144 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 104.977214359 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6 20.9669160288 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.25397266985 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126052153257 0.242375264174 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524002054809 0.0925447433944 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509580346553 0.071462118173 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996084055284 0.151781067708 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053437106393 0.0609392437508 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 53.1260098522 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.94827586207 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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