In the modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals as food or other products,
such as medicines and clothing. Do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, protecting the animal has been becoming one major topic in the world due to the development of fashion and food industry or medicines manufactured. Some people consider the killing of animals to produce food and other products to be unnecessary.
These days, people are faced with many public health challenges, regarding poor health conditions including cancer, obesity or cardiovascular disease caused by excessive consumption of meats on a regular and long-term basis. Experts are calling that people should change in their diets so they can enjoy better health. Fortunately, we can find easily many alternative meat products bought on the market. In fact that, vegetarian diet is being favored by a growing number of people and it can same number of nutrients for consumers. In particular, mushroom and tofu contain high protein of levels, a kind of nutrient presumably only found in meat, therefore we can use it as a substitute.
Furthermore, medical experiments on animals and medicines manufactured from part of body’s animal received little endorsement in the past. Nowadays, herbal and many other types of plant-based medicines such as ginger which cure many diseases and support doctor in the treatment of many illnesses. More seriously, thousands of wild animals are killed each year such as tiger or minks, their fur take to produce coast or accessories for the fashion industry. There are similar products made from plats or artificial materials that can fulfill our needs therefore animal do not suffer for our demands anymore.
In conclusion, I think that animal is unnecessary in our demand such as clothing, medicines and food because we can chose different resources from herbal, plants or artificial material.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 117, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'choose'
Suggestion: choose
...hing, medicines and food because we can chose different resources from herbal, plants...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, regarding, so, therefore, i think, in conclusion, in fact, in particular, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3309352518 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85885920041 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640287769784 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4415140181 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.5 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189532807982 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687190437554 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550705335012 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128504315468 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691316970428 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.