Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
Some people argue that the government should use its veto to proscribe death-defying pursuits. I thoroughly agree with this opinion.
Firstly, extreme sports such as skateboarding and mountain biking probably have inherently catastrophic and even lethal effects on athletes and others. For the most part, minor mistakes while taking part in extreme sports could lead to serious injuries and deaths for individuals who engage in these athletic activities, especially considering that occurrences could ruin their whole career. For example, professional football players should not participate in any extreme sports because this might broke their legs. Therefore, they cannot follow their passion any longer.
Secondly, there are more and more people engaging in dangerous sports because of the lure of internet fame and lucrative sponsorships. Inexperienced people participate in these activities merely to take pictures and post them in some social networks. Furthermore, many sponsors motivate people to compete in some sorts of dangerous activities because they want to associate their brands with athletes’ name to boost the brand awareness.
Opposing views claim that extreme sports are advantageous for seeking thrills and increasing life experiences. Admittedly, from the perspective of scientists, these pursuits provide a satisfying rush of adrenaline. Moreover, life will get less boring if young people enjoy these sports instead of surfing social platforms. Nonetheless, this stance fails to recognize the pivotal importance of health. Thus, death-defying sports should be outlawed by state authorities.
In conclusion, for the aforementioned explanation, I believe that preventing dangerous sports is beneficial for societies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.95219123506 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03000031195 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673306772908 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.2966530304 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7333333333 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186865208545 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645362978885 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530069124629 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098570089301 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294893106386 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.93 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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