Many people believe that parents are not as close to their children as they used to be. Suggest some reasons why this could be true
Nowadays, a good relationship between children and their parent is almost non-existent. Although many people believe that poor communication stems from stubborn children, this problem starts from multilateral factors.
Teenager is the turbulent and vulnerable phase which brings about physical and psychological change in children. First, with the child’s increasing in cognitive and social skills, he goes beyond the home setting. He doesn’t want to talk to his parents anymore because he thinks that their parents do not understand his lifestyle and their parents think that their child is not interested in conversation between parents and child anymore. Second, some parents are alcoholics or addicts might physically and verbally abuse their child. As a result, child does not want to see their parents anymore with an afraid to be beaten or criticized and shouted at himself again.
Works takes precedence over everything in our life, as a result, many parents have to set aside their children. Parents neglect the children’s needs and the kids learn not to expect anything from their parents. As a result, the kids have to live independently and parents do not have any time spent in their children, which totally freezes the communication between them. Moreover, if any of these needs are not taken care of, then children begin to disrespect their parents. Such kids tend to disobey their parents and break the rule, which wanes parents’ interest in talking to kids.
More parents do not want to spend time in talking to their children like they used to do because of many reasons. A good relationship between parents and child can lay the foundation for the child’s personality and overall behavior.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, so, then, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25362318841 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73527448861 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557971014493 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1252195926 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.571428571 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277050402716 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985865115554 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496681830777 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171354713193 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0165572792151 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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