In some countries, people waste a lot of food that they buy in shops and restaurants.
Why do people waste food? What can we do to reduce the waste?
Human being is totally incapble of living without food. However, millions of
tons of foods is wasted on a faily basis. This essay will endeavor to point out
some main causes of this phenomenon before its solutions are drawn
There are some prominent reasons for the current situation. One of them
could originate from the fact that many wealthy families have a tendency to
buy too much food. In other words, they frequently purchase such an
excessive quantity of food for reservation, but not consume this in time;
therefore, these kinds of food become the leftovers and turn decayed. It is
estimated that approximately four billion tons of food is wasted globally each
year, around 15 percent of which is derived from affluent families. Another
reason worth mentioning is that the supplies of food far exceed the
customers' demands. Everyday, due to the overproduction of food, millions of
food sources, which cannot be maintained in good condition overnight, is
unnecessary, which culminates in being discarded.
Nonetheless, the predicament could be mitigated by some workable solutions
proposed hereafter. First and foremost, individuals should be highly aware of
the important impacts of food on their daily life. By purchasing and consuming
food intelligently, people would treasure the values of food, which not only
helps them save money, but also reduce the volume of leftover food. In
addition, the food makers have to study the needs of the market in order to
balance the production and consumption of food resources throughout the
country to avoid abundance.
In conclusion, that food is currently being squandered is such a pervasive
and on-going issue that matters the entire world. The negative buying habit of
many prosperous families and the uncontrollable food production could be
blamed for this issue. Nevertheless, acknowledging the true values of food to
the world and adusting the food distribution could resolve the aformentioned
problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 12, column 25, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: Every day
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Line 24, column 5, Rule ID: ON-GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
...ing squandered is such a pervasive and on-going issue that matters the entire world. Th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, therefore, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46794871795 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92692616553 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608974358974 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9186513778 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.733333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 27.0 4.38176352705 616% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259222216857 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891946408599 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482217516935 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0666103093718 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478742477314 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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