You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory.
Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter
• explain why you are writing
• describe what went wrong with the meal and service
• suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant
Dear Mr.Smith
This letter is to express my utter disappointment with the food that was served in your restaurant after our company's meeting that took place
on the 18th of August 2020. You are aware that our organisation Prime Consultants has been a regular patron for the past six months.
This has been our first bad experience. The choice and quality of food was a lot to be desired. The meal was cold, insipid and tasteless.The fruit salad was not fresh.
I did bring this to the attention of the restaurant manager but all he could do was apologise.There was no attempt to rectify the situation.
Today, I have received several complaints from our senior members expressing their concern together with a recommendation to refrain from booking your restaurant again.
Please look into this matter at the earliest and advise what you can do to rectify the situation. A complimentary meal for our members is an option that must be strongly considered.
This will give you an opportunity for your restaurant to make amends and to showcase your true quality and hospitality..
Yours sincerely
Tomy Jones
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...nager but all he could do was apologise.There was no attempt to rectify the situation...
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Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...owcase your true quality and hospitality.. Yours sincerely Tomy Jones
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ality.. Yours sincerely Tomy Jones
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04838709677 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89703142443 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645161290323 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7391437372 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3636363636 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.81818181818 4.34317383033 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258354113178 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846456662642 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478817850252 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115184628071 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394853225738 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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