In some countries people spend long hours at work Why does this happen Is it positive or negative development

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In some countries, people spend long hours at work. Why does this happen? Is it positive or negative development?

There has been a tendency that employees are devoting long working hours in some parts of the world. This phenomenon has stemmed from pressure at work and at home. I totally believe that this development will have adverse impacts on people's physical and mental health.

There are several reasons why workers are spending more hours at workplace, Firstly, they are often pushed to meet deadlines given by their employers to receive regular paycheck. This is because in working environment, boosting sales and generating profits are priorities and employers often exploit their workers to gain productivity and revenue. Therefore, the employees usually have no choice but to finish the enormous workload before going home. Secondly, some people going to work have the hope of gaining more money to provide for their families. They would need salary to send their children to a good school or to build a decent house for the whole family. These financial burdens are the key factors making them stay long hours at work.

From my point of view, working long hours can be detrimental to workers' health. With regard to mental health, facing stress and pressure would lead to several mental disorders such as depression. This is because they would have little or no free time to relax or entertain themselves. In terms of physical health, their bodies would suffer from some illnesses due to working excessively. For example, lack of sleep and exercises can cause a variety of health problems including obesity, heart attack, or even cancers.

In conclusion, the trend of working intensively can be explained by the pressure that workers have to face on a daily basis. I contend that this development can be unhealthy for the workforce and people should maintain a work-life balance lifestyle.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15017064846 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56498663268 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580204778157 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3044365242 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.3125 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3125 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8125 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269187896714 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904695415886 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697368763127 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179058286526 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844429354771 0.056905535591 148% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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