Government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve.
it is the government's responsibility to provide certain services to it's people. As such, the government should have in mind what policies and goals it intends to achieve while in government. However, the government can not possibly get to know the needs of the people by depending on it's own judgement alone. Therefore, there is a need for the government to listen to the plight of their followers.
As much as it is true that the government has the responsibility to do what is best for it's people, there is no standard measure to ascertain the best option at everything given time. But the populace, at every given time, knows what it needs. Moreover, what is a government that does not listen and act on the plights of it's people.
When the government pay attention to the opinions of the people, it engenders trusts and makes the pople believe that the government is truly "theirs", thereby making the implementation of government targets. acting parallel to the will of the populace might bring forth the opposite effect by inciting public unrest as witnessed in non-peaceful protests, all over the world. this can make it difficult for the government to carry out it's duties. thereby, undermining the presence of governance itself.
Another disadvantage on the path of the government for basing it's action solely on it's judgement, especially in a democratic setting, is that such decision can instigate to people to vote out the people in government as a whole and vote in people that they perceive would dance to their tunes. it can lead to a worse result in non-dramocratic settings in the form of rebellion as it is being witness in various countries in the middle East.
In a nutshell, the main aim of governance is to provide the needs of the people, and this cannot be achieved by disconnecting communication with the populace. Thefore, it is of great importance for the government to abide by the will of the people in order to ensure the smooth running of the government.
- Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student s field of study Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position 60
- A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community Do you support or oppose the factory Explain your position 70
- Teachers salaries should be based on the academic performance of their students Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take In developing and 66
- Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well being of the societies and environments in which they operate Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations provided they operate within the law is to make as mu 54
- Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take In developing and support 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 341.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88856304985 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0177620227 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50146627566 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4730388958 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.133333333 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7333333333 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21222442357 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720590204852 0.0831039109588 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511823330051 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119905014518 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473429646534 0.0667264976115 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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