The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing.
What is the reason for the growth in overweight people in society?
How can this problem be solved?
Becoming trending that many people experience risk healt problem being obesity. Obesity is a ailmen which involves fat excess in the body.
There are several reasons for this trending and also a number of strategies to encourage to many people for eat healty food. The main cause, many people consume much unhealty food. It is because that live in city metropolitan which people are buzy for work and there is no time for cooking healty food and choose fast food.
For example fast food is instant noodles hamburger, pizza and other things.
The other reason is the lifestyle. Many people prever grabfood or come to cafe and buy modern food.
For example modern food is cake, super sweet drink, meatball and other things.
As result, it makes people malnutrisi and easy diases. Diases is stroke, heart attack, carbohydrate and other things.
All in all, about obesity to each other unhealty food. It is important to eat healty food and make there body vit everyday.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...healt problem being obesity. Obesity is a ailmen which involves fat excess in the...
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Line 2, column 314, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to fast'
Suggestion: to fast
...time for cooking healty food and choose fast food. For example fast food is instant...
^^^^
Line 3, column 34, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'noodles'' or 'noodle's'?
Suggestion: noodles'; noodle's
...food. For example fast food is instant noodles hamburger, pizza and other things. The...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 114, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...eat healty food and make there body vit everyday.
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 41.998997996 24% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 808.0 1615.20841683 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 164.0 315.596192385 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92682926829 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23673297914 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 176.041082164 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591463414634 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 506.74238477 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3463364987 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.1538461538 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.6153846154 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.92307692308 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165262728127 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635368135316 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070930750127 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0748366645307 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628983368145 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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