Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say thar there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, environmental problems are very common. It is often argued by people that loss of some specific plants and animals is major problem, but some believe that there are other main environmental problems are present also. In the following paragraphs, I intend to discuss both views.
On the one hand, some believe that main environmental problems are related to the loss of main plants and animals. There is loss of many species and animals because of the rising need of food of people. People eat various animals which is the main reason in the extinction of animals and plants. For example, in comparison with past time, now people eats more and more non vegetarian food, which in turn lead to extinction of some animals. Moreover, plants have been used in production of medicines. So, people cut down a lot of plants. That is why there is huge loss species of plants.
Besides the problem of loss of plants and animals, there are many other environmental also. Firstly, the problem of depletion of ozone layer. Ozone layer is important for earth as it protects people from the harmful rays of sun but due to the modernization of world there is increase in the quantity of carbon emission which affects the ozone layer negatively. Secondly, rise in the pollution level which is major problem of environment. There are many pollutions which affects the society. For example, air pollution, noise pollution, water pollution and many more. Pollution level is increasing because of the industries are increasing all over the world.
In conclusion, I believe there are many major environmental issues present rather than the loss of species of plants and animals.
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... loss of species of plants and animals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03237410072 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68683847267 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467625899281 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.3464053415 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7222222222 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4444444444 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368031342512 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118567192312 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101040981834 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242247830452 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107150435186 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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